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Volcano1985 Posted 18 years ago
Grammar

Check My Sentence Plz

Your photos are really not artificial, they came out sincerely.
  

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Hi, I don't think this works. " These are two separate sentences. You can either use a semi colon, or a period and capital letter.

  • Hi, I don't think this works.
  • " These are two separate sentences.
  • You can either use a semi colon, or a period and capital letter.
  • I think your contrasting ideas should be treated in a more parallel way.
  • They are not this; they are that.
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Hi,

I don't think this works. The simple problem is that you have a "comma splice." These are two separate sentences. You can either use a semi colon, or a period and capital letter.

I think your contrasting ideas should be treated in a more parallel way. They are not this; they are that. They are not artificial (adjective); they ar

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