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Shravanmm Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

Check my sentence please...

Dear teachers,

The reason why I am calling you today is, as you know the winter is approaching/nearing, many gas and electricity suppliers in your region have come up with new tariff's which offers you the cheapest unit rates and standing charge so I am calling you to do a free price comparison and to let you know which supplier is offering you the best deal in your region.

Many thanks..
  

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I am calling you today because winter is approaching and many gas and electricity suppliers in your region are offering you the cheapest unit rates and standing charges. I am calling you to offer a free price comparison, to let you know which supplier is offering you the best deal in your region.

  • I am calling you today because winter is approaching and many gas and electricity suppliers in your region are offering you the cheapest unit rates and standing charges.
  • I am calling you to offer a free price comparison, to let you know which supplier is offering you the best deal in your region.
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I am calling you today because winter is approaching and many gas and electricity suppliers in your region are offering you the cheapest unit rates and standing charges. I am calling you to offer a free price comparison, to let you know which supplier is offering you the best deal in your region.
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Thank you so much for correcting it. I appreciate your help.

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