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Volcano1985 Posted 17 years ago
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This is a period, when the enormous changings come up in the way of industrialization and the working conditions of individual, when the technology takes labor’s place more, when automatisation and computer’s improvment increase at the same time.

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This is a period in which industry has experienced enormous changes. Great improvements in technology and the computer have changed the working conditions of the individual, in many cases replacing labor by automation.

  • This is a period in which industry has experienced enormous changes.
  • Great improvements in technology and the computer have changed the working conditions of the individual, in many cases replacing labor by automation.
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This is a period in which industry has experienced enormous changes. Great improvements in technology and the computer have changed the working conditions of the individual, in many cases replacing labor by automation.

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