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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
Letter Writing

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I would like inform that my Global Contractor Registration is missing in my boss ( Mr. Frank Claus Id 45080) approval center. I made the request two week before still could not go his approval.

Before I was working with Mr. Saleh Al Shabnan retired from Sabic 1 April 2014.

Kindly forward this request to concern department in IT to resolve this issue.
  

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Okay, it is not always clear what you want to say. The first paragraph is confusing. I will try to word it correctly, but I have to guess at what you mean.

  • Okay, it is not always clear what you want to say.
  • The first paragraph is confusing.
  • I will try to word it correctly, but I have to guess at what you mean.
  • I would like to inform you that my Global Contractor Registration, which I sent to my boss (Mr.
  • Frank Claus, ID 45080) for approval, is missing.
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Okay, it is not always clear what you want to say. The first paragraph is confusing. I will try to word it correctly, but I have to guess at what you mean.

I would like to inform you that my Global Contractor Registration, which I sent to my boss (Mr. Frank Claus, ID 45080) for approval, is missing. I made the request two weeks ago.

Before this, I was working with Mr. S

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