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Anonymous Posted 13 years ago
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Check my resume please
Hi everybody,
i did my resume in English, but as no native speaker, my skills have some limits (and the translator too ^^). So if someone can take some minutes to just see if i did big mstakes, i will be very grateful.
thank you
‘‘ Conscientious, diplomatic and passionate,
I have many different work experiences in the field of tourism. ’’
Language skills
English
TOEIC Listenning and reading 815/990
CECR - B2 Level
Spanish
CECR - B1 Level
IT/Computer skills
-Excel,
-Word,
-Powerpoint
-Adobe Indesign
-Adobe Photoshop
-Adobe Première Pro
Blog on my experience as volunteer in Sweden
Realized a short promotional movie sur la Région du Saguenay Lac Saint Jean au Québec
- International current events
-French political life
- Social sciences
- Politics of European Union
Swimming practice, Fitness, Travels
Education
2012 - Bachelor’s Degree in Tourism Management at La Rochelle Business
School of Tourism (La Rochelle, France)
2012 - Bachelor’s Degree in Tourism Economy
ITBS - ESTHUA (University of Angers, France)
2012 - State-certified operations manager in leisure organisations and
touristic accomodation
2010 - Undergraduate technical diploma in Tourism (History, geography,
Tourism’s market in the world, accounting, marketing and management)
2008 - A-level diploma in Business Management, Accounting and Marketing
Work Experience
January/August 2013 Management Assistant
Coopérative de solidarité VERTE (Saguenay,Québec)
Missions: -Financial diagnosis of the organisation and suggestion of solutions
-Creation of new work method in the Eco-tourism branch
-Reorganisation of the differents branches
-Setting up partnerships
-Reservation monitoring (Hotello) and the distribution
channels (Booking.com, Softbooker, Hostelworld)
-Update the websites (web 2,0, Content Management System, Social Media)
Octobre/Novembre 2012 Visitor Services Assistant
Regional Cuncil of Vendée (Les Sables d’Olonne, France)
Race of Vendée Globe 2012
Mission: Inform the public and Survey the stocks of posters, flyers
April/September 2012 Final year internship of Business developpement
Coopérative de Solidarité VERTE (Saguenay, Quebec)
Missions: -Setting up packages in the reservation system «Hotello»
-Etablish new tools (agreements for example) and negociate with partners
-Creation of promotional tools
-Run daily tasks of Accomodations
-Help clients to book and respond to any client questions
January/ August 2011 Europeen Voluntary Service
Nätvekert SIP (Växjö, Sweden)
Mission: Creation of a community café
Physical design, tasks organisation, workflow including cuisine and menus.
Language used: English, immersion in an international atmosphere.
June/September 2010 Tour-operator represantative
Company «Vagues Océanes» (Camping at Palavas-les-flots, France)
Missions: - Check-in/Check-out Mobil-Homes facilities (25 Mobil-Homes)
-Tourism information and Tourist attention
- Proposing and Solving tourist’s problems
- Team work and maintain harmonious relationship with the staff of the camping
January/February 2009 Internship as Tour Guide
Tourism Office of Saint-Emilion (Wine region) (Saint-Emilion,France)
i did my resume in English, but as no native speaker, my skills have some limits (and the translator too ^^). So if someone can take some minutes to just see if i did big mstakes, i will be very grateful.
thank you
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Objective : Sale position for French market‘‘ Conscientious, diplomatic and passionate,
I have many different work experiences in the field of tourism. ’’
Language skills
English
TOEIC Listenning and reading 815/990
CECR - B2 Level
Spanish
CECR - B1 Level
IT/Computer skills
-Excel,
-Word,
-Powerpoint
-Adobe Indesign
-Adobe Photoshop
-Adobe Première Pro
Blog on my experience as volunteer in Sweden
Realized a short promotional movie sur la Région du Saguenay Lac Saint Jean au Québec
- International current events
-French political life
- Social sciences
- Politics of European Union
Swimming practice, Fitness, Travels
Education
2012 - Bachelor’s Degree in Tourism Management at La Rochelle Business
School of Tourism (La Rochelle, France)
2012 - Bachelor’s Degree in Tourism Economy
ITBS - ESTHUA (University of Angers, France)
2012 - State-certified operations manager in leisure organisations and
touristic accomodation
2010 - Undergraduate technical diploma in Tourism (History, geography,
Tourism’s market in the world, accounting, marketing and management)
2008 - A-level diploma in Business Management, Accounting and Marketing
Work Experience
January/August 2013 Management Assistant
Coopérative de solidarité VERTE (Saguenay,Québec)
Missions: -Financial diagnosis of the organisation and suggestion of solutions
-Creation of new work method in the Eco-tourism branch
-Reorganisation of the differents branches
-Setting up partnerships
-Reservation monitoring (Hotello) and the distribution
channels (Booking.com, Softbooker, Hostelworld)
-Update the websites (web 2,0, Content Management System, Social Media)
Octobre/Novembre 2012 Visitor Services Assistant
Regional Cuncil of Vendée (Les Sables d’Olonne, France)
Race of Vendée Globe 2012
Mission: Inform the public and Survey the stocks of posters, flyers
April/September 2012 Final year internship of Business developpement
Coopérative de Solidarité VERTE (Saguenay, Quebec)
Missions: -Setting up packages in the reservation system «Hotello»
-Etablish new tools (agreements for example) and negociate with partners
-Creation of promotional tools
-Run daily tasks of Accomodations
-Help clients to book and respond to any client questions
January/ August 2011 Europeen Voluntary Service
Nätvekert SIP (Växjö, Sweden)
Mission: Creation of a community café
Physical design, tasks organisation, workflow including cuisine and menus.
Language used: English, immersion in an international atmosphere.
June/September 2010 Tour-operator represantative
Company «Vagues Océanes» (Camping at Palavas-les-flots, France)
Missions: - Check-in/Check-out Mobil-Homes facilities (25 Mobil-Homes)
-Tourism information and Tourist attention
- Proposing and Solving tourist’s problems
- Team work and maintain harmonious relationship with the staff of the camping
January/February 2009 Internship as Tour Guide
Tourism Office of Saint-Emilion (Wine region) (Saint-Emilion,France)
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Top answer
"I have experience in many aspects of the tourism field" sounds a little better than "I have many different work experiences in the field of tourism" and I'm assuming where it says "Hotello" you are trying to say "Hotel". Also, under your Work Experience: It says "Reorganisation of the differents branches". It should say " Reorganization of different branches" and "Octobre/Novembre" should say "October/November" .
- "I have experience in many aspects of the tourism field" sounds a little better than "I have many different work experiences in the field of tourism" and I'm assuming where it says "Hotello" you are trying to say "Hotel".
- Also, under your Work Experience: It says "Reorganisation of the differents branches".
- It should say " Reorganization of different branches" and "Octobre/Novembre" should say "October/November" .
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"I have experience in many aspects of the tourism field" sounds a little better than "I have many different work experiences in the field of tourism" and I'm assuming where it says "Hotello" you are trying to say "Hotel".
Also, under your Work Experience:
It says "Reorganisation of the differents branches". It should say " Reorganization of different branches" and "Octobre/Novembre" s
Also, under your Work Experience:
It says "Reorganisation of the differents branches". It should say " Reorganization of different branches" and "Octobre/Novembre" s
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hi Anonymous 
Really good points.
Hotello is a software (for hotels).
And for the months, i 'm sorry, each time i
Really good points.
Hotello is a software (for hotels).
And for the months, i 'm sorry, each time i
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