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Mosja Posted 7 years ago
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Check my product description please?

Supposing your selling products on eBay and you have to write a product description

Introducing... My homemade internet radio

Features

- High portability

- 3.5 inch screen

- Wi-Fi

- IPTV Supported

- Over 1,000 stations worldwide

- Comes with KODI preinstalled The most popoular media platform

  

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mosja Supposing your you're selling products on eBay and you have to write a product description Introducing... 5 inch screen - Wi-Fi - IPTV Supported - Over 1,000 stations worldwide - Comes with KODI preinstalled The most popoular media platform All of your features are short descriptions until you get to the last one. Why so wordy on the last one?

— CalifJim

  • mosja Supposing your you're selling products on eBay and you have to write a product description Introducing...
  • 5 inch screen - Wi-Fi - IPTV Supported - Over 1,000 stations worldwide - Comes with KODI preinstalled The most popoular media platform All of your features are short descriptions until you get to the last one.
  • Why so wordy on the last one?
  • Otherwise, fine.
  • Also, I had no idea that radios needed screens.
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mosja

Supposing your you're selling products on eBay and you have to write a product description

Introducing... My homemade internet radio

Features

- High portability

- 3.5 inch screen

- Wi-Fi

- IPTV Supported

- Over 1,000 stations worldwide

- Comes with KODI

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mosja- 3.5 inch screen

Does the screen dimension mean the dimension of the screen of your own original digital product (a kind of mp3)?

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