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Volcano1985 Posted 18 years ago
Check My Poem Plz
You are crazy, crazy, can there such a separation be ?
You are crazy, crazy, is the soul ever sent away the body ?
When your summer and spring become autumn
When your heart is full with sorrows
You will also understand when you are in other’s hearth without me
When your summer and spring become autumn
When your days call you to account
You will also cry when you are in other’s hearth without me
The memories are page by page
You are piece by piece in my heart
At times go, at last
Your love doesn’t let me live, it kills me
You are crazy, crazy, is the soul ever sent away the body ?
When your summer and spring become autumn
When your heart is full with sorrows
You will also understand when you are in other’s hearth without me
When your summer and spring become autumn
When your days call you to account
You will also cry when you are in other’s hearth without me
The memories are page by page
You are piece by piece in my heart
At times go, at last
Your love doesn’t let me live, it kills me
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Heart , not hearth . What makes you think that this is a poem, Volcano?
- Heart , not hearth .
- What makes you think that this is a poem, Volcano?
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Heart, not hearth.
What makes you think that this is a poem, Volcano?
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Heart, not hearth.
What makes you think that this is a poem, Volcano?
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It was a typo!
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When your heart is full with sorrows
You will also understand when you are in other’s hearth without me
Volcano wrote it correctly at the first line
but then, the typo
I dont understand what u wrote Volcano, do you mind explaining?
look
When your heart is full with sorrows
You will also understand when you are in other’s hearth without me
Volcano wrote it correctly at the first line
but then, the typo
I dont understand what u wrote Volcano, do you mind explaining?
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This is posted at the top of our forum, Volcano:
POETS: PLEASE READ THIS BEFORE POSTING YOUR WORK
We would like you to feel free to post your own poetry or discuss the idea and making of poetry in this forum, but you should be aware that your work is open to critique. Posting your efforts here sets you open to both unrestrained admiration for your literary ta
This is posted at the top of our forum, Volcano:
POETS: PLEASE READ THIS BEFORE POSTING YOUR WORK
We would like you to feel free to post your own poetry or discuss the idea and making of poetry in this forum, but you should be aware that your work is open to critique. Posting your efforts here sets you open to both unrestrained admiration for your literary ta
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Kawthar.K.
I mean when she is with someone else and in his hearth ( to be the bride there), she will also understand my worth
I mean when she is with someone else and in his hearth ( to be the bride there), she will also understand my worth
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In the is your problem, Volcano. It takes more than a dictionary to make a poem..
In the is your problem, Volcano. It takes more than a dictionary to make a poem..
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