Check my poem pls
How do I mend a broken heart? By:Tee
How do I mend a broken heart
My entire world has fallen apart
Everything has gone numb
Everything hurts
I want to run away and hide
From all the pain, caused by everyone
Love will do you more harm than good
If only I knew this from the start
How do I mend a broken heart
I want to scream
I want to cry
Why can't I move on like her
I tried so hard
I tried my best
I gave it my best
Now there's nothing left
How do I mend a broken heart
Even my best friend is gone
Why does everyone I know leave
Does everyone hate me
Is there something wrong with me
I don't understand
It hearts do much
The aching pain in my heart
And yet I keep hurting myself
And my friends judge me
And now there's no one left
How do I mend a broken heart
I don't hate you
I can't
Used to daydream of what we could be
I still love you
But I can't look at you
Because it hurts
And now he's with you
And I'm left alone
To sit in my despair
How do I mend a broken heart
You don't .......
Top answer
I believe that you have double-posted this poem. My comment is the same: it is not a poem but just a series of cliches arbitrarily broken into short lines. Wait a few months until your sentimental feelings have faded and then delete it from your portfolio.
- I believe that you have double-posted this poem.
- My comment is the same: it is not a poem but just a series of cliches arbitrarily broken into short lines.
- Wait a few months until your sentimental feelings have faded and then delete it from your portfolio.
Get the Weekly English Kit 📬
New words, one handy idiom, and a 2-minute quiz — delivered to your inbox to keep your streak alive.
I believe that you have double-posted this poem. My comment is the same: it is not a poem but just a series of cliches arbitrarily broken into short lines. Wait a few months until your sentimental feelings have faded and then delete it from your portfolio.
0
Related Questions