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Nanduni Posted 8 years ago
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Check my poem please.

My Autumn's Lover
I wish i were a birdSo I could fly to your house;Where I longed to live too.I will sit on the window seatAnd look through the window paneCovered with dust and dirt.
There i see the faceThe face i longed to see for yearsThe face i longed to catch a glimpseI see the innocent faceFallen Fast asleep in peaceThe face i wished to kissNot yesterday but a decade agoWrinkled now with hairs grey
A fallen glass there i seewith some brown liquid spilledand a cigar half burnt But yearning for life yet
  

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My Autumn's Lover I wish i were a bird So I could fly to your house; Where I longed to live too. I will sit on the window seat And look through the window pane Covered with dust and dirt. There i see the face The face i longed to see for years The face i longed to catch a glimpse I see the innocent face Fallen Fast asleep in peace The face i wished to kiss Not yesterday but a decade ago Wrinkled now with hairs grey A fallen glass there i see With some brown liquid spilled And a cigar half burnt But yearning for life yet.

  • My Autumn's Lover I wish i were a bird So I could fly to your house; Where I longed to live too.
  • I will sit on the window seat And look through the window pane Covered with dust and dirt.
  • There i see the face The face i longed to see for years The face i longed to catch a glimpse I see the innocent face Fallen Fast asleep in peace The face i wished to kiss Not yesterday but a decade ago Wrinkled now with hairs grey A fallen glass there i see With some brown liquid spilled And a cigar half burnt But yearning for life yet.
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My Autumn's Lover

I wish i were a bird

So I could fly to your house;

Where I longed to live too.

I will sit on the window seat

And look through the window pane

Covered with dust and dirt.


There i see the face

The face i longed to see for years

The face i longed to catch a glimpse

I see the innocent face

Fallen Fast a

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