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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
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Check my poem please

I never wanted to fail anyone,
I did my best but it was not enough.
Whoever had experience would know what I'm about;
I wish someone had warned me in advance.

This type of things could easily discourage
But it's not a big surprise to me.
Had only I foreseen how it would turn around
I would not be so broken now.
  

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I never wanted to fail anyone . I did my best , but it was not enough. Whoever had experience would know what I'm about; I wish someone had warned me in advance.

— CalifJim

  • I never wanted to fail anyone .
  • I did my best , but it was not enough.
  • Whoever had experience would know what I'm about; I wish someone had warned me in advance.
  • This type of thing could easily discourage , But it's not a big surprise to me.
  • Had only I foreseen how it would turn around I would not be so broken now.
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I never wanted to fail anyone.
I did my best, but it was not enough.
Whoever had experience would know what I'm about;
I wish someone had warned me in advance.

This type of thing could easily discourage,
But it's not a big s
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Thanks! And are there any logical mistakes? Does it look like a decent poem?
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AnonymousThanks! And are there any logical mistakes? Does it look like a decent poem?
I don't see any logical mistakes. If this is very early in your career as a poet, then it's certainly a decent effort. It doesn't have a lot of the characteristics of truly great poetry written by the masters throughout the centuries, but then you can't expect to hit a home
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