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Waqasdaar Posted 19 years ago
Letter Writing

Check my Motivation Letter ..Waiting for your urgent response.

0I am writing to apply for the Master of Internetworking00.00 I have successfully completed B.Sc (Hons) in computer science from 01i00Punjab University College of Information Technology02i00 with the CGPA 01b003.2002b00/01b004.002b00 from September 2001 to May 2005. Because my interest was in Data communication and network relating courses so I choose my specialization in B.Sc (Hons) is computer networks. During my specialization I took subjects such as Advance Networking, Network Security and Network Management. This gave me more in depth knowledge of the networking. After completing my B.Sc (hons) degree, I joined 01i00World Online Cybersoft Technologies02i00 a leading ISP of the 010200 as a 01i00Junior Network Engineer02i00 in order to get practical experience. Since Jan 2006, I am still working in this prestigious organization. My job responsibilities are listed in my Curriculum Vita.02br
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00 I have a flexible attitude, and can work well both independently and as part of a team. I believe that my communication skills and general sociably facilitate my job, and enable me to work constructively with colleagues and students alike. 02br
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00 The 01i00Master of Internetworking02i00 would make me more confident, because it will not only enhance my educational skills but as well as professional skills. Because doing Master in Internetworking it will give me the chance to learn new technologies and trends. My wish is to pursue a masters degree which is practical oriented, and I specifically wish to study at 01b00Royal Institute of Technology,02b00 because it is very highly regarded amongst European Universities. Moreover friends and workmates who have studied at your institution have expressed very positive opinions about your university staff and teaching methods. 02br
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00 Thank you for considering my application, and I hope that I may look forward to hearing from you soon.0-
  

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0Hello, Waqasdaar. The bold sections below are my own corrections. Do not use bold, italics, or other contrasting typesets for names of courses, institutions, titles, etc.

  • 0Hello, Waqasdaar.
  • The bold sections below are my own corrections.
  • Do not use bold, italics, or other contrasting typesets for names of courses, institutions, titles, etc.
  • 02br 02br 00Dear01b 00 Dr.
  • [Smith]:02b 02br 02br 00I am writing to apply for 01b 00your02b 00 Master of Internetworking 01b 00program02b 00.
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0Hello, Waqasdaar. The bold sections below are my own corrections. Do not use bold, italics, or other contrasting typesets for names of courses, institutions, titles, etc. I see nowhere in your letter that they should be used.02br
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00I want to apply for a Master's Programme and therefor wrote my first letter of motivation. If someone could give me any further advice, I'll be very thankful!02br
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00Dear Sir or Madam,02br
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00I am a highly motivated student who wishes to apply for the Master’s Programme in Cognitive Neuroscience with specia

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