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Waqasdaar Posted 19 years ago
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Check my Motivation Letter ..Waiting for your urgent response.
0 I am writing to apply for the Master of Internetworking 00 . 00 I have successfully completed B.Sc (Hons) in computer science from 01 i 00 Punjab University College of Information Technology 02 i 00 with the CGPA 01 b 00 3.20 02 b 00 / 01 b 00 4.0 02 b 00 from September 2001 to May 2005. Because my interest was in Data communication and network relating courses so I choose my specialization in B.Sc (Hons) is computer networks. During my specialization I took subjects such as Advance Networking, Network Security and Network Management. This gave me more in depth knowledge of the networking. After completing my B.Sc (hons) degree, I joined 01 i 00 World Online Cybersoft Technologies 02 i 00 a leading ISP of the 01 02 00 as a 01 i 00 Junior Network Engineer 02 i 00 in order to get practical experience. Since Jan 2006, I am still working in this prestigious organization. My job responsibilities are listed in my Curriculum Vita. 02 br
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00 Because my interest is in the field of Networking and Data Communication, so I have enhanced my knowledge through a number of trainings like 01 i 00 CCNA, CVOICE, CCSP 02 i 00 01 i 00 (SNPA, SNRS), and Wireless Technologies 02 i 00 . 02 br
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00 I have a flexible attitude, and can work well both independently and as part of a team. I believe that my communication skills and general sociably facilitate my job, and enable me to work constructively with colleagues and students alike. 02 br
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00 The 01 i 00 Master of Internetworking 02 i 00 would make me more confident, because it will not only enhance my educational skills but as well as professional skills. Because doing Master in Internetworking it will give me the chance to learn new technologies and trends. My wish is to pursue a masters degree which is practical oriented, and I specifically wish to study at 01 b 00 Royal Institute of Technology, 02 b 00 because it is very highly regarded amongst European Universities. Moreover friends and workmates who have studied at your institution have expressed very positive opinions about your university staff and teaching methods. 02 br
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00 Thank you for considering my application, and I hope that I may look forward to hearing from you soon. 0-
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00 Because my interest is in the field of Networking and Data Communication, so I have enhanced my knowledge through a number of trainings like 01 i 00 CCNA, CVOICE, CCSP 02 i 00 01 i 00 (SNPA, SNRS), and Wireless Technologies 02 i 00 . 02 br
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00 I have a flexible attitude, and can work well both independently and as part of a team. I believe that my communication skills and general sociably facilitate my job, and enable me to work constructively with colleagues and students alike. 02 br
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00 The 01 i 00 Master of Internetworking 02 i 00 would make me more confident, because it will not only enhance my educational skills but as well as professional skills. Because doing Master in Internetworking it will give me the chance to learn new technologies and trends. My wish is to pursue a masters degree which is practical oriented, and I specifically wish to study at 01 b 00 Royal Institute of Technology, 02 b 00 because it is very highly regarded amongst European Universities. Moreover friends and workmates who have studied at your institution have expressed very positive opinions about your university staff and teaching methods. 02 br
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00 Thank you for considering my application, and I hope that I may look forward to hearing from you soon. 0-
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0 Hello, Waqasdaar. The bold sections below are my own corrections. Do not use bold, italics, or other contrasting typesets for names of courses, institutions, titles, etc.
- 0 Hello, Waqasdaar.
- The bold sections below are my own corrections.
- Do not use bold, italics, or other contrasting typesets for names of courses, institutions, titles, etc.
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- [Smith]: 02 b 02 br 02 br 00 I am writing to apply for 01 b 00 your 02 b 00 Master of Internetworking 01 b 00 program 02 b 00 .
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0 Hello, Waqasdaar. The bold sections below are my own corrections. Do not use bold, italics, or other contrasting typesets for names of courses, institutions, titles, etc. I see nowhere in your letter that they should be used. 02 br
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0 Dear all, 02 br
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00 I want to apply for a Master's Programme and therefor wrote my first letter of motivation. If someone could give me any further advice, I'll be very thankful! 02 br
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00 Dear Sir or Madam, 02 br
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00 I am a highly motivated student who wishes to apply for the Master’s Programme in Cognitive Neuroscience with specia
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00 I want to apply for a Master's Programme and therefor wrote my first letter of motivation. If someone could give me any further advice, I'll be very thankful! 02 br
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00 Dear Sir or Madam, 02 br
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00 I am a highly motivated student who wishes to apply for the Master’s Programme in Cognitive Neuroscience with specia
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