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Volcano1985 Posted 16 years ago
Grammar

Check My Lyrics Translation Please

Surely call me once a month or a year
Spare a little bit of your time and,
Sometimes ask if I am alive or dead
Write my name on your heart, don't forget me.

  

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My suggestions: 1. ] 2. Remove the comma after and.

— Cool Breeze

  • My suggestions: 1.
  • ] 2.
  • Remove the comma after and.
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My suggestions:
1. Instead of surely, write: Be sure to [call me...]
2. Remove the comma after and.

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