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IYC1986 Posted 19 years ago
Letter Writing

check my letter please

0April 14, 200702br
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00To US travel company’s manager02br
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00 00I’m a person who loves traveling a lot and I had taken a trip with your company on Nghe An at Fri Fed 13 and I still had a good time but I think that this trip is not really good at all. I and my family had gotten many problems and it broke the trip so I write this letter to explain for your company about the defect and I hope that will help your company and I will have a better trip with your company in the future.02br
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00 00The facilities are the most important problem. The first big problem is the TV is broken and it made me upset a lot because I didn’t know about anything such as weather, news and I don’t have something to relax. My mom is also disappointing when she didn’t see any dishwasher and it’s very tired for her after a long day travel around.02br
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00After that, other problems broke out trips and we felt angry a lot. The first time when we go there we lost nearly one day to clean the house because of its terrible mess. And everything is more difficult to do it because all the shops shut on the first day. I also didn’t find milk and coffee on the second days and we had a breakfast without drinks.02br
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00More services are a good for me when I take another trip with your company because this will make us feel more comfortable. The first thing is for the people who had a trip like me have a refund. I don’t mean it’s must a 100 percent refund but this make me want another trip. Other services such as free weekend or more places to travel is very good for us to choose.02br
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00I think my complains and suggestions is maybe too much but I hope that your company will do something about it and I hope that I will take more trips with your company in the future without any complain. Anyway, thank you for read my letter.02br
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00 00Thanks again for everything.02br
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0 I’m a person who loves traveling a lot and I01del 00 had taken 02del 00 01font 00 took02font 00 a trip with your company 01del 00on02del 00 01font 00at 02font 00Nghe An01font 00 I hope this is a place name02font 00 at Fri Fed 13 and I still had a good time but I think that this trip 01font 00was02font 00 not really good at all. I and my family had 01del 00gotten 02del 01font 00so 02font 00 many problems 01del 00and it02del 01font 00 that02font 00 we ended our 01del 00broke the02del 00 trip so 01font 00th02font 01font 00at02font 00 I 01font 00could 02font 00write this letter to explain 01del 00for 02del 00your company about the 01font 00defecincies 02font 00and I hope01del 00 that02del 00 01font 00this 02font 00will help your company and I will have a better trip with your company in the future. 02br 02br 00 The facilities 01font 00were02font 00 01font 00one of02font 00 the most important problem01font 00s02font 00.

  • 0 I’m a person who loves traveling a lot and I01del 00 had taken 02del 00 01font 00 took02font 00 a trip with your company 01del 00on02del 00 01font 00at 02font 00Nghe An01font 00 I hope this is a place name02font 00 at Fri Fed 13 and I still had a good time but I think that this trip 01font 00was02font 00 not really good at all.
  • I and my family had 01del 00gotten 02del 01font 00so 02font 00 many problems 01del 00and it02del 01font 00 that02font 00 we ended our 01del 00broke the02del 00 trip so 01font 00th02font 01font 00at02font 00 I 01font 00could 02font 00write this letter to explain 01del 00for 02del 00your company about the 01font 00defecincies 02font 00and I hope01del 00 that02del 00 01font 00this 02font 00will help your company and I will have a better trip with your company in the future.
  • 02br 02br 00 The facilities 01font 00were02font 00 01font 00one of02font 00 the most important problem01font 00s02font 00.
  • 02font 02br 02br 01del 00After that02del 00 01font 00apart from these,02font 00 other problems01del 00 broke out trips 02del 01font 00ruined our trip too02font 00 and we 01del 00felt angry a lot 02del 01font 00really felt very angry02font 00.
  • The first time when we 01del 00go 02del 01font 00went02font 00 there we 01del 00lost02del 00 01font 00spent02font 00 nearly one day 01del 00to clean02del 01font 00 cleaning02font 00 the house because of its terrible mess.
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0 I’m a person who loves traveling a lot and I01del00 had taken 02del00 01font00 took02font00 a trip with your company 01del00on02del00 01font00at 02font00Nghe An01font00 I hope this is a place name02font00

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