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Khan_SB Posted 19 years ago
Grammar

Check my grammer and also suggest what should I do to imorove my written En

0 00Yesterday , I was really pissed off and cranky. I also posted some wired , retarded questions comments ETC … but who cares …. 02br
00Any way after gettin off from my work I hit gym and work out for 3 hours .. I was so pissed off but I thought to be …. So after work-out when I head back home , I took shower and hit one of the clubs in downtown …. 02br
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00I started dancing on the floor , while dancing I saw 3 gals oh my ..real hot chicks … I jus went up to `em and made some moves and they start laughing … I said to one of ‘em "you are really cute" … she said “thank you “ and after a minute she took off my specs “ and she asked me can you see me now .. I siad with sly smile .."you’re looking more cute now" … she laughed a lot on this comment after few secs .. I just lean to her and said this in her ear “ I wish I was crossed eye so I can see you twice” .. she was all over me … 02br
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00so I thought , now its time to close the deal … I don’t want any ONS cus she was really GF material … I asked her 02br
00"are you single , she said “NO” … and I thought not again …. You know what I was thinking at that time “ 02br
00Some body here post an article that 10 out of 7 woman doesn’t want to date with foreigners’” 02br
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00Any way ,so I asked her twice like a gentleman .. I`m neither can be a bad boy nor punk … so finally I left the club …. 02br
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00So do you also think that being a foreigner and live at wilderness place kills your dating scene too …. 02br
00And lots of hot and beautiful chicks don’t wna date with me cus I’m foreigner? OR what’s wrong with me… 02br
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00Note:spending time with `em 20 minutes LOL00 02br
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0Hi,02br 02br 00This is written in a style that is really just a continuous stream of thought. In a style like this, things like grammar, spelling and punctuation are not usually considered very important, so my advice is not to worry much about them. 05002br 02br 00Best wishes, Clive010id1

— Clive

  • 0Hi,02br 02br 00This is written in a style that is really just a continuous stream of thought.
  • In a style like this, things like grammar, spelling and punctuation are not usually considered very important, so my advice is not to worry much about them.
  • 05002br 02br 00Best wishes, Clive010id1
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0Hi,02br
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00This is written in a style that is really just a continuous stream of thought. In a style like this, things like grammar, spelling and punctuation are not usually considered very important, so my advice is not to worry much about them. Just enjoy your writing.05002br
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0Thanks .. but Im on one of the dating forums and whenever I wrote there .. I always found somebody ******** about my grammer .. So I want to improve it and want to use my anger in .. -:)02br
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0Hi Khan,02br
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00I have to tell you that I had NO idea what . I would suggest that you do NOT use those types of abbreviations unless you are really sure your audience uses them too.02br
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00I personally have no patience for... writing that just... goes on and on... without period...just one thought connected to the next... etc so my suggestion (if
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0I`m sorry and +ve ( I mean Positive ) ... and thanks for your reply !! 0-
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