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Anonymous Posted 16 years ago
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Our Teller Supervisors were the first to complete and discuss thier Vision Boards at their May 13th meeting.

What is a Vision Board, you ask?

A way to visually define your personal and professional goals both short term and long term.




  

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Our Teller Supervisors were the first to complete and discuss their Vision Boards at their May 13th meeting. What is a Vision Board, you ask? A way to visually define your personal and professional goals , both short term and long term.

  • Our Teller Supervisors were the first to complete and discuss their Vision Boards at their May 13th meeting.
  • What is a Vision Board, you ask?
  • A way to visually define your personal and professional goals , both short term and long term.
  • Note comma added to last sentence.
  • The first sentence seems ambiguous: does it mean that they were the first at their meeting, or the first overall and it happened to be at their meeting?
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Our Teller Supervisors were the first to complete and discuss their Vision Boards at their May 13th meeting.

What is a Vision Board, you ask?

A way to visually define your personal and professional goals, both short term and long term.

Note comma added to last sentence.

The first sentence seems ambiguous: does it mean that they were the first at

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