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Jexis Posted 11 years ago
Medical & Dental Studies

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I got bad reaction in NSIAD drugs, first I start using mefenamic acid as pain reliever for my toothache because my toothache attacks every night this give me hard time to fall asleep, but my stomach is really dont like mefenamic acid after a few minutes after taking mefenamic acid my stomach began to getting worst, and after a few hours later I vomited, and I dont like the feeling of that, then I use naproxen as alternative to mefenamic acid and my body had a bad reaction, after taking naproxen at night, tomorrow morning I felt my right cheek is so heavy and when I look at the mirror I seen my right cheek is swelling and also I got a fever, my question is, is this a allergic reaction and all kind of NSAID is bad for me? Or its just a normal reaction, I would like to try ibuprofen as alternative pain killer but first I need advice from doctor.
  

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Most of this paragraph is one huge run-on sentence. 'Run-on' means that you have jammed several sentences together incorrectly, making it all very difficult to read. You need to revise your text into several shorter sentences, starting each with a capital letter, and ending each with either a period or a question mark.

  • Most of this paragraph is one huge run-on sentence.
  • 'Run-on' means that you have jammed several sentences together incorrectly, making it all very difficult to read.
  • You need to revise your text into several shorter sentences, starting each with a capital letter, and ending each with either a period or a question mark.
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Most of this paragraph is one huge run-on sentence. 'Run-on' means that you have jammed several sentences together incorrectly, making it all very difficult to read.

You need to revise your text into several shorter sentences, starting each with a capital letter, and ending each with either a period or a question mark. Then
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(Here my new version) I got a bad reaction in NSIAD drugs. First I start using Mefenamic Acid as pain reliever for my toothache because my toothache attacks every night and this give me a hard time to fall asleep. But my stomach is really don't like Mefenamic Acid. A few minutes ago after taking Mefenamic Acid my stomach began to getting worst, and after a few hours later I vomited and I do
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I have had a bad reaction to NSIAD drugs.

First I started taking mefenamic acid as a pain reliever for my toothache attacks every night, but this made it hard to fall asleep. My stomach really doesn't like mefenamic acid. A few minutes after taking it, my stomach began to get worse, and a few hours later, I vomited unpleasantly.

Then I tried naproxen sodium as an

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