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Jajar Posted 18 years ago
Letter Writing

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August 21, 2008



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Dear Sir



I saw your advertisement on ..............yesterday and wish to apply for the position of E-commerce as I find the position interesting and appropriate to my ambitions.



I am 23 years old, single and a graduate of ...............................................................................................I have to use graphic software to produce an efficiency webpage and integrated with marketing skills of E-commerce in online communications and planning individual plan to product. I have good command of written and spoken in English and able to work in new teams. I hope that my Qualification will be a considerable plus for COMPANY.


I enclosed my resume and photograph as requested, and I look forward to hearing from you at your convenience.



Thank for your time and consideration.



Yours Sincerely,







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Hi, Here are a few comments. yesterday and wish to apply for the position of E-commerce E-commerce is not a positoion. ie you can't say 'I'm an E-commerce' as I find the position interesting and appropriate to my ambitions.

  • Hi, Here are a few comments.
  • yesterday and wish to apply for the position of E-commerce E-commerce is not a positoion.
  • ie you can't say 'I'm an E-commerce' as I find the position interesting and appropriate to my ambitions.
  • It's normal to say something here about how you can help the employer rather than how he can help you I am 23 years old, single In Canada, your marital status is not relevant, but in your country perhaps it is and a graduate of .......................
  • I have to use graphic software to produce an efficiency webpage and integrated with marketing skills of E-commerce in online communications and planning individual plan to product .
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Hi,

Here are a few comments.

Clive

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Dear Sir,



I saw your advertisement on ..yesterday and wish to apply for the position of E-commerce E-commerce is not a positoion. ie you can't say 'I'm an E-commerce' as I find the position interesting and appropriate to my

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