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Role of women in society has been being an important discussion and during last twenty years, it has changed. some people believe that children who their mother works outside have more problem than others such as juvenile delinquency. It does not have any contrast with my believes.
First, the position of women is not the same in different countries. For instants; in European countries most women work outside, but in deprived countries still there are many women who are at home. Although the position of women in backwarded countries have been improving.
second, a woman as ahuman need to have some times that belongs to her. woman need to be in society and have more connection with people to know more about relations and improve their information in any subjects. In this way, mothers can help their children moe. Having more activity and being independence cause women educate their children better because they know children's problems more and get more familiar with them.
on the other hand, women have a difficult duty beacuse they should control children, house work and also their outworks. Having a considerable responsibility cause that some folks thought women can not manage all their work; so it may hurt their family.Also responsibility of having children and raising them in an aceptable way is an important reason that parents should makle balance between home and outwork to have a warm and successful family. Although jurenile delinquency have variety factors, lack of parents help can influence an children more than any other reasons.
In conclusion, many factors cause an getting children in trouble. Totally working outside or being at home can not be the only reason for juvenile deliquency. inaddition mothers can educate their children better with balancing their activities.
Role of women in society has been being an important discussion and during last twenty years, it has changed. some people believe that children who their mother works outside have more problem than others such as juvenile delinquency. It does not have any contrast with my believes.
First, the position of women is not the same in different countries. For instants; in European countries most women work outside, but in deprived countries still there are many women who are at home. Although the position of women in backwarded countries have been improving.
second, a woman as ahuman need to have some times that belongs to her. woman need to be in society and have more connection with people to know more about relations and improve their information in any subjects. In this way, mothers can help their children moe. Having more activity and being independence cause women educate their children better because they know children's problems more and get more familiar with them.
on the other hand, women have a difficult duty beacuse they should control children, house work and also their outworks. Having a considerable responsibility cause that some folks thought women can not manage all their work; so it may hurt their family.Also responsibility of having children and raising them in an aceptable way is an important reason that parents should makle balance between home and outwork to have a warm and successful family. Although jurenile delinquency have variety factors, lack of parents help can influence an children more than any other reasons.
In conclusion, many factors cause an getting children in trouble. Totally working outside or being at home can not be the only reason for juvenile deliquency. inaddition mothers can educate their children better with balancing their activities.
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The role of women in society has been an important discussion, but during last twenty years it has changed. Some people believe that children who have mothers that work outside have more problems than other children such as juvenile delinquency. It does not contrast with my beliefs.
- The role of women in society has been an important discussion, but during last twenty years it has changed.
- Some people believe that children who have mothers that work outside have more problems than other children such as juvenile delinquency.
- It does not contrast with my beliefs.
- Firstly, the position of women is not the same in different countries.
- For instance, in European countries most women work outside, but in deprived countries there are still many women at home, although the position of women in backward countries has been improving.
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The role of women in society has been an important discussion, but during last twenty years it has changed. Some people believe that children who have mothers that work outside have more problems than other children such as juvenile delinquency. It does not contrast with my beliefs.
Firstly, the position of women is not the same in different countries. For instance, in European countries
Firstly, the position of women is not the same in different countries. For instance, in European countries
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