Hi everyone! Could you correct my essay pls? I've got to hand it in to my English teacher and it would be good if she found no errors in it.
Thanks in advance.
Complaining about faulty goods is never easy. Most people do not like to make a fuss. You should remember that when buying something from a shop you enter into a contract with the shop and the shop is obliged to deal with your complaint if you are not satisfied with your purchase. When does a commodity satisfy you? First of all, when it is not damaged and works properly. Second, a commodity must correspond to its description - that is to say, a salesperson’s description or label. Last, a commodity should be fit for its purpose. If you find that the product you just bought from a shop is not satisfactory, you can go back to the shop to cancel the purchase and ask for complete refund. You can also accept a repair or replacement if you do not mind.
Food is one of the most essential people’s needs. Changes in food provision concern us all. If the price of a product changes and everything else concerning the product is unchanged, the demand for the product changes. If the price goes up twice, a lot of consumers will start buying substitute products (if they are available and cheaper). The demand for substitute products will increase while the demand for the main product will diminish.
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Hi ReDSanchous, Just my two cents... Complaining about faulty goods is never easy. Most people do not like to make a fuss.
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Hi ReDSanchous, Just my two cents...
Complaining about faulty goods is never easy.
Most people do not like to make a fuss.
You should remember that when buying something from a shop you enter into a contract with the shop and the shop is obliged to deal with your complaint if you are not satisfied with your purchase.
When (answer does not match the question) does a commodity satisfy you?
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Complaining about faulty goods is never easy. Most people do not like to make a fuss. You should remember that when buying something from a shop you enter into a contract with the shop and the shop is obliged to deal with your complaint if you are not satisfied with your purchase. When (answer does not match the question) does a commodi