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0Well the topic is . A magical Object, I always wright stories, please post ur opinions , cons and pros.,02br
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00 00I was on my way back home from Publix and I decide to take a shortcut. It was about 00, the sun was starting to close its eyes. So I take the shortcut through the forest and the day kept getting darker by the minute. As I looked at the sky I see this really bright blue light shining over me, at first I didn’t give it any importance. That mysterious light kept shining and shining at one point I thought it was just an airplane but then it started to blink repeatedly at a fast pace. Out of nothing this huge white beam hits the ground and I see this crystal type of object float down through the beam.02br
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00 00When the crystal finally got down it made such a force that it knocked me out for several minutes, when I woke up I didn’t know if that was a dream or if it was real. Then I see the crystal lying on the floor, I approach it cautiously and with curiosity. As I see on the floor this four sided crystal, the peculiar part was that the crystal had these symbols on each side; it had a water, fire, rock, and air symbol. The crystal was dull grayish and it as pretty rough. It was about the size of a wallet.02br
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00 00I got the crystal and put it in a Publix bag and I try to get home as soon as possible. When I got home I entered my lab and started to test out the crystal. I tried to put some acids and gasses and nothing would happened, so I breathed a little and the air symbol lighted up! So then I start to think what would happen to the other symbols, I added water, fire, and rock and they all started to light up. When they were all lighted up, the crystal began to float and it changed into this blue/purple color, I felt this immense vibration take over my whole body. When I grabbed the crystal I felt like I’ve never felt before, I felt superhuman. When I fell down in the forest I scraped my knee, but when I rubbed it with my hand the scrape was gone, my knee was healed. After that I was thinking what else I can do with the crystal00 00so I imagined my self floating upwards suddenly my feet got off the ground and I start to fly.02br
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00 00I started to do the unthinkable. I visited many places not reachable by humans. I went to the peak of the 00. I visited the 00. But when I was on my way to the Great Wall of China, I flew over the Himalayas Mountains and I saw something very strange I saw this small isolated temple made out of rock, it had the same symbols as the crystal , I would have stopped and taken a look but I was flying too fast. After all of that I went back home to rest from a very tiring but exhilarating day. That night was the craziest night I had ever had. I was in a dream that was very vivid it was lucid. There was this voice telling me to go the temple and seek out the truth. I was very confused, I kept following this shadow and that shadow kept leading me to the temple. I finally woke up from that horrible dream, my heart was beating, and I was sweating tremendously. Then I instantly went to the temple.02br
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00 00Inside the temple there were bizarre signs and hieroglyphics. One drawing showed the earth and a huge meteor exploding it. In the pure center there was this small pillar and a hole in the middle shaped like a crystal. All of a sudden the ground begins to vibrate and the picture on the wall that illustrates the earth and the meteor begins to glow! At that instance I ran towards the pillar but I twisted my leg, then I rubbed my hands on the leg and I was healed! Now I was sprinting towards the pillar and every second I got closer and closer the crystal began to vibrate and produce this massive energy by the second. Then I inserted the crystal in to the whole but nothing happened, then a huge explosion happened and it covered the whole earth, I got knocked unconsciously. Then I woke up in my bed as if it were a dream, I get up and check outside, it’s all normal. Then I look at my leg and I have a scar from a scrape.02br
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