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Kittixay Posted 18 years ago
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Good morning teachers and classmates. Today I'm very happy and nervous to talk to you about the air pollution. Man has destroyed everything including the nature and its environment. They have destroyed the forests by slash and burn the trees for cultivation. The seas are also in danger because they are polluted by waste things such as chemical wastes, nuclear wastes, oil leaking from the ships and the smoke pouring out from vehicles and industrialized factories. So, nowadays we are living in danger. If everybody in the world can preserve and conserve the beautiful blue earth, the nature and its environment, people will live happily, healthy and wealthy.
  

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Kittixay Good morning teachers and classmates. Today I'm very happy and nervous to talk to you about the air pollution. Man has destroyed everything including the nature and the environment.

— BarbaraPA

  • Kittixay Good morning teachers and classmates.
  • Today I'm very happy and nervous to talk to you about the air pollution.
  • Man has destroyed everything including the nature and the environment.
  • [NOTE: "Destroyed" is past.
  • Not everything is destroyed.
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KittixayGood morning teachers and classmates. Today I'm very happy and nervous to talk to you about the air pollution. Man has destroyed everything including the nature and the environment. [NOTE: "Destroyed" is past. Not everything is destroyed. You may want to say "Well on the way to destroying" or something like that. What do you see as the difference
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