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Deani Posted 20 years ago
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MY LOVE
Love can be interpreted as many meanings. People need love in their life. Without love, we feel lonely. Without love, we can die.
The love of my life is my beloved mother. She is everything to me. Even though she only has a small body, but she is such a tough woman. Since my father passed away for 17 years ago due to heart attack because of the smoking habit, she became my mother and my father as well. That is why I hate smokers! She did all the works to support all her 7 children. I know, it is a very difficult responsibility to be a good mother and at the same time a good father. But, she did so to make sure that all my siblings
grow up healthily. She never grunts for everything that she had sacrificed for us.
My mother always advice my siblings to change our life through education. With only education, we can make my mother happy. She really hopes that all my siblings work for the government. So, we choose teaching field. All my sisters now become the teachers and I am going to be an English teacher soon as well. That is why I am here in KUSZA. I want her to be proud of me as her daughter.
I salute my mother for everything that she has done for us. I love her so much indeed. She is my love. She is my life. She means so much to me. Mom, I love you!
Love can be interpreted as many meanings. People need love in their life. Without love, we feel lonely. Without love, we can die.
The love of my life is my beloved mother. She is everything to me. Even though she only has a small body, but she is such a tough woman. Since my father passed away for 17 years ago due to heart attack because of the smoking habit, she became my mother and my father as well. That is why I hate smokers! She did all the works to support all her 7 children. I know, it is a very difficult responsibility to be a good mother and at the same time a good father. But, she did so to make sure that all my siblings
grow up healthily. She never grunts for everything that she had sacrificed for us.
My mother always advice my siblings to change our life through education. With only education, we can make my mother happy. She really hopes that all my siblings work for the government. So, we choose teaching field. All my sisters now become the teachers and I am going to be an English teacher soon as well. That is why I am here in KUSZA. I want her to be proud of me as her daughter.
I salute my mother for everything that she has done for us. I love her so much indeed. She is my love. She is my life. She means so much to me. Mom, I love you!
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Hi Deani-- welcome to English Forums. Here are a few points: interpreted many ways lives not life leave two blank spaces after a period at the end of a sentence has only not only has body, but no such away 17 years ago a heart attack That is why I hate smokers! -- delete this sentence; it is irrelevant to the essay topic work not works seven not 7 I know it is (no comma) father; but she complains about anything not grunts for everything has sacrificed , not had advises not advice their lives not our life Only with , not With only will work not work we have chosen the sisters have now become teachers
- Hi Deani-- welcome to English Forums.
- Here are a few points: interpreted many ways lives not life leave two blank spaces after a period at the end of a sentence has only not only has body, but no such away 17 years ago a heart attack That is why I hate smokers!
- -- delete this sentence; it is irrelevant to the essay topic work not works seven not 7 I know it is (no comma) father; but she complains about anything not grunts for everything has sacrificed , not had advises not advice their lives not our life Only with , not With only will work not work we have chosen the sisters have now become teachers
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Hi Deani-- welcome to English Forums. Here are a few points:
interpreted many ways
lives not life
leave two blank spaces after a period at the end of a sentence
has only not only has
body, but
no such
away 17 years ago
a heart attack
That is why I hate smokers! -- delete this sentence; it is irre
interpreted many ways
lives not life
leave two blank spaces after a period at the end of a sentence
has only not only has
body, but
no such
away 17 years ago
a heart attack
That is why I hate smokers! -- delete this sentence; it is irre
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