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"My personal career goal is to work in a field where I can express my creativity and passion. I do not want to work a typical nine to five job that will become boring, dreadful, and something to loathe. I want to do something that I will love and that will excite me every day I get out of bed. To do simply that I would hope to start a thriving business in photography due to it always being something I have dreamed about. I want to capture the world behind the lens of a camera and share it with others.
Doing my fair share of researching of art schools and photography academies I have yet to find another school that could compare to The Art Institute of Tampa. Walking through the doors going to your open house gave me such an enormous rush of excitement and chills. The campus was large and welcoming. Moreover, the faculty was friendly and helpful. I took a tour of the campus and fell in love with how each room tailored to a different creative purpose. The more I learned from the presentations the more I knew this is the place I wanted to be. I admire that the classes are hands on and that if you ever need help there is always going to be someone there to have your back and walk you through it. The curriculum designed around the Digital Photography Program is exactly what I'm looking for and I know I will be receiving a quality education. I look forward to amercing myself with the technology and people this school has to offer.
I have faith that pursuing a degree in digital photography will set me on the path towards my goals. Currently, I capture nature shots with my phone and share them with friends. This is something that I love doing between waiting for the right lighting or trying out new angles, but I want something bigger and better. I want to learn the technical aspects of photography to make these pictures in higher quality with cameras and software in post production. I will also need training in how to make a portfolio, make a business out of this passion with hard work, and then how to market myself once it has been created. Not only do I want this education, but I want to be challenged and pushed to keep creating high quality and interesting content and to meet people I can work with who are just as creative.
I believe this school can bring out the best of my creative side and I am prepared to commit a lot of time to my education. I have already registered for three College Bound classes while I am still attending high school because I am so ready to get started pursuing this degree. When I start attending this school I would like to participate in some of the many clubs you have to offer such as film, game design, and graphic design. My creative interests range farther than just photography. I believe this will help make me a more well-rounded student with different skill sets, influence more collaborations, and help make my photography more interesting.
In the next five years, I would like to see myself graduated and working as a freelance and travel photographer. I love nature and culture and I want to capture photos of everything in this big planet has to offer. I would also like to own a studio and office to work out of. This is my dream and I am going to chase after it no matters the costs."

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