Check my descriptive writing please

The wave struck the shore as if there were monstrous witches hovering toward the shore. A fast-paced train—with its carriage was clinging like a daisy chain—passing through the wave. The wave hit the train drastically. In the heat of the moment, the wave turned into a fire, burning the whole town. The plaintive, raucous noise of screaming echoed across the town.
Jack—a black, tall lanky man was sauntering there—saw a monstrous flammy, flown fire dancing on top of the roof—which was his house. His black face turned red as if the coal was burning with an extreme temperature. Jack got angry, He went into the fire, beating it with his fists. The fire didn't hurt but burned him instead. A marvelous bob-haired women hovered as if she was a superman grabbed a sprinkler from the garden in front of Jack's house and sparged the fire. With a blast of water spurting out. The fire disappeared.

If you could, please rate my CEFR writing skills.