Check my creative writing please

The thunder was rumbling, chucking the intense howling wind giving a restless fatigue feel. Pauline was lost in the mist. I couldn't see her.

She had got a chappy-black fringe reminding me of the wondrous girl from the heaven. We had spent time together for like five years. The elegant her load of bread was, would latch into my heart, giving tremendous pulses that never made me forgot her. I remembered going to the beach with her. We were talking about how funny it would be if the ball was tumbling down the dale and popped like a water balloon. But where was she now?

Write about the time when you, or someone you know, went missing.

Your response could be real or imagined.