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Fumiko Kurokawa Posted 15 years ago
Letter Writing
Check my cover letter please! :-))
Hi all,
I wold like someone to check my cover letter which needs to apply soon.
I appreciate it if you give me some advices and enjoy celebration with me if I ger an offer.:-)
Many thanks,
Fumiko
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Dear Hiring Manager,
I'm writing this cover letter to apply for the position of OOOOOO Manager listed on Job@OOOOOOO. My whole experience at top publishers in Japan working with developers in US and UK covered the description of duties which includes: planning, coordinating and monitoring various localisation projects with global teams, scheduling of tasks, deadlines and milestones, solving of problems effectively, coordination of communication between project teams and external parties, evaluation of team performance and software requirements, and other related responsibilities. This is an industry I'm familiar with and eager to continue working in.
I would bring experience and expertise to the position and hope you will consider me for this job. I'd be happy to arrange phone interviews or visit your office to talk with you in detail about what you expect from the person your hire.
Please email me at Email Removed so we can arrange a date and time that works for you. I appreciate your reading my cover letter and resume and I hope to talk or have a chance to meet you soon.
I wold like someone to check my cover letter which needs to apply soon.
I appreciate it if you give me some advices and enjoy celebration with me if I ger an offer.:-)
Many thanks,
Fumiko
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Dear Hiring Manager,
I'm writing this cover letter to apply for the position of OOOOOO Manager listed on Job@OOOOOOO. My whole experience at top publishers in Japan working with developers in US and UK covered the description of duties which includes: planning, coordinating and monitoring various localisation projects with global teams, scheduling of tasks, deadlines and milestones, solving of problems effectively, coordination of communication between project teams and external parties, evaluation of team performance and software requirements, and other related responsibilities. This is an industry I'm familiar with and eager to continue working in.
I would bring experience and expertise to the position and hope you will consider me for this job. I'd be happy to arrange phone interviews or visit your office to talk with you in detail about what you expect from the person your hire.
Please email me at Email Removed so we can arrange a date and time that works for you. I appreciate your reading my cover letter and resume and I hope to talk or have a chance to meet you soon.
Top answer
This is my a passing two cents. This does not appear to me a cover letter. It looks more like a email asking for an interview.
- This is my a passing two cents.
- This does not appear to me a cover letter.
- It looks more like a email asking for an interview.
- Also experiences described have only general information and not striking enough to draw hiring interest.
- You need to reword and rephrase your letter, especially the second part.
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This is my a passing two cents. This does not appear to me a cover letter. It looks more like a email asking for an interview.
Also experiences described have only general information and not striking enough to draw hiring interest.
You need to reword and rephrase your letter, especially the second part. I have a question. What is "Milestones" in this context?
Also experiences described have only general information and not striking enough to draw hiring interest.
You need to reword and rephrase your letter, especially the second part. I have a question. What is "Milestones" in this context?
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