Are there any mistakes in my writing?
Last week, I finally got along with Jim. We really had in common--We love video games. Today I'm going to have him down to a primitive building in wales to find out, if there were really ghosts in that building like (or like as?) the news said, so I woke Jim up. He was sleeping on the couch, waked up and miffed at me for waking him up. "I'm not ready for this! I'm tired" said he. Then We went to the store to buy some torches. Since I didn't have much money, had ton of bills to pay so I needed to find a good, cheap torch. We shopped around and eventually, managed to bought (or got?) the best, cheap torch in the store. Jim said "You must be off your rocket to enter (or get in,go into?) that haunted building". I kinda ignored him at that time and we started driving to the haunted building. When we arrived, Jim cried like a baby. I can't have a look on (or at?) his face and laughed. He cried like a newborn baby. Unfortunately, he can't refuse to go this time as he accepted to enter the building with me (any writing suggestions?). We entered the building. Surprised! We were walking around the hall. A chair—which was placed in the left corner— started to levitate. We ran out of the building real quick—We never enter (or been, be there,go to?) that building again.
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