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The commody 46 was a primitive knocked-off commodore 64 computer made in 1994. Since, it was operated on (or using?) command line.

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Last week, I finally got along with Jim. We really had in common--We love video games. Today I'm going to have him down to a primitive building in wales to find out, if there were really ghosts in that building like (or like as?) the news said, so I woke Jim up. He was sleeping on the couch, waked up and miffed at me for waking him up. "I'm not ready for this! I'm tired" said he. Then We went to the store to buy some torches. Since I didn't have much money, had ton of bills to pay so I needed to find a good, cheap torch. We shopped around and eventually, managed to bought (or got?) the best, cheap torch in the store. Jim said "You must be off your rocket to enter (or get in,go into?) that haunted building". I kinda ignored him at that time and we started driving to the haunted building. When we arrived, Jim cried like a baby. I can't have a look on (or at?) his face and laughed. He cried like a newborn baby. Unfortunately, he can't refuse to go this time as he accepted to enter the building with me (any writing suggestions?). We entered the building. Surprised! We were walking around the hall. A chair—which was placed in the left corner— started to levitate. We ran out of the building real quick—We never enter (or been, be there,go to?) that building again.

last but not least.

Dictionary is very crucial when learning a language. It contains over thousands of unknown words. Also, there is a thesaurus: a book that contains a list of meanings for (or of?) each single words. Words on the list has the same meaning. There are two types of dictionaries: bilingual and monolingual. Bilingual dictionaries has a word meanings in foreign languages while monolingual dictionaries has a word meanings in that language.(Any writing suggestions? It,s sound repetitive) However, using monolingual dictionaries can be a tricky task for beginners. It is good to start with a bilingual dictionary, if you are an absolute beginner.

Doing homework might be the hardest task for some students. It depends on their teacher and the amount of homework they get. Most students think that homework is absolutely waste of time. This might not be true for some reasons.
From my point of view, homework is not always waste your time; Homework is a set of exercises teacher assign (or order?) us to do, to recap the lesson we have learned and again it depends on the teacher. Some teachers give us a homework that will be used on their exam so we have got to do it; otherwise, we will be failed on the exam.