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Anonymous Posted 8 years ago
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Dear, Tom

Hi, who are you? I would like to tell you about a new rule for my school.the new rule is that student would not be allowed to bring cell phones to school. I think this rule is good because we can to lose concentration and it can harm the lesson, also to the teacher. Moreover now in the pauses, all my friend's class play together and talk together. I think that rule does good work because now me and all my friend's class very combined. I wish you to feel that feeling that rule does.

Hope to see you soon

your, Shir

  

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Dea r To m, Hi, who are you? I would like to tell you about a new rule for my in our school. T he new rule is that studen ts would are not be allowed to bring cel lp hones to school.

  • Dea r To m, Hi, who are you?
  • I would like to tell you about a new rule for my in our school.
  • T he new rule is that studen ts would are not be allowed to bring cel lp hones to school.
  • I think this rule is good because we cellphones can affect our to lose our concentratio n, and it that can harm our studies and frustrate our the lesson, also to the teacher s .
  • Moreover during breaks, now in the pauses, all my friend's classmates now play together and talk together.
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Dear Tom,

Hi, who are you? I would like to tell you about a new rule for my in our school. The new rule is that students would

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