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Mosja Posted 7 years ago
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Check if my descriptive writing ok.

I was driving to a lake. When I arrived. Stunned! The coastline was immersed in an lighting-gold beach like bulky golds in a mysterious chest that had never been dug up before. Sinews of light showered the dreamy sea as if a man had found his wondrous destiny. I was strolling through the arc of beach laying under a vast sky. Tremendous and curvy it was. The amazement would latch into my body and send a restless tremble across my body.

  
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