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Musthakahmed1 Posted 17 years ago
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Hi Bilal,
How are you dear, i hope you are keeping good there. Dear i can not to go for the interview which was given by you. You know i got other offer to go to Dubai. My friend sends visa for me, then i will plan to go there.

Dear, your brother left Bangalore. I asked to him try for other jobs, but he said that his mother called him to native, so he made his mind up to go back. I convinced him so much, but he never stuck to my points. Anyways, tell me how do you feel there. Are you ok with your job or not. I will meet you there if i come ok.

Keep in touch

Regards
Musthak Ahmed
Bangalore
  

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Try: Dear Bilal, How are you? I hope you are well. I cannot attend the interview that you have allocated for me.

  • Try: Dear Bilal, How are you?
  • I hope you are well.
  • I cannot attend the interview that you have allocated for me.
  • As you know, I have another offer in Dubai.
  • A friend has sent me a visa, and I plan to go there.
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Try:

Dear Bilal,

How are you? I hope you are well. I cannot attend the interview that you have allocated for me. As you know, I have another offer in Dubai. A friend has sent me a visa, and I plan to go there.

Your brother has left Bangalore. I had asked him to try for other jobs, but he said his mother called him back, so he made up his mind to return. I tried hard t

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