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Akmal Posted 10 years ago
Grammar

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In case if next shift person was late or absent that person must be informed officer and on duty shift persons one hour before shift schedule time by phone and message, on duty shift person will continue to do his duty for next shift and informed officer as soon as possible by phone and message.
  

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It is all rather garbled. In the phrases "that person must be informed officer" and "and informed officer as soon as possible" it is not clear who is doing what. You have messed up the verb formations to the point where it is unclear what you are trying to say.

  • It is all rather garbled.
  • In the phrases "that person must be informed officer" and "and informed officer as soon as possible" it is not clear who is doing what.
  • You have messed up the verb formations to the point where it is unclear what you are trying to say.
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It is all rather garbled. In the phrases "that person must be informed officer" and "and informed officer as soon as possible" it is not clear who is doing what. You have messed up the verb formations to the point where it is unclear what you are trying to say.

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