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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
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Dear All,
Pls comment the grammar of the following sentance:
"I would like to clarify that when I could be awarded my graduation certification since my working supervisor asks me to update my qualification"
Pls comment the grammar of the following sentance:
"I would like to clarify that when I could be awarded my graduation certification since my working supervisor asks me to update my qualification"
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It has big problems. You have too many subordinating conjunctions. Eliminate either 'when' or 'since' and re-work the rest of the text to suit.
- It has big problems.
- You have too many subordinating conjunctions.
- Eliminate either 'when' or 'since' and re-work the rest of the text to suit.
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It has big problems. You have too many subordinating conjunctions. Eliminate either 'when' or 'since' and re-work the rest of the text to suit.
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