Check essay about men and women

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I wrote an essay about men and women. Could somebody read this and correct mistakes?
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Difference between men and women?

People always noticed that there is a difference between men and women. It's not only appearance difference but also character, habits, skills difference. Some researchers think that male and female brains are wired differently. It means that there are parts of brains that are developed by men and by men and by women differently. I agree with this opinion.
Fist of all, in the US, a study was conducted. In this study, scientists scanned the brains of 1000 person including men, women, and children. This study showed that men's and women's hemispheres have not the same connections. It can explain why men are better for example at navigating and women can be multitasking. Not only that but I also think that a lot of women are very similar also like men. For instance, women are able at the same time to watch TV. to speak with the husband, and to clean up the apartment. Often men drive a car better than women. Or men speak briefly. Somebody will say that what I meant is the only stereotype.
Some people say that women and men don't have distinctions so another view is sexism and discrimination.
Weighing the pros and cons, I come to the conclusion that we should wait for the results of scientific research to more reason to discuss this theme.