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My family and I had fun and exciting vacation last month. We started from Sun City West and drove to Interstate 10 where we headed west to North San Francisco. We spent the first night at my best friend’s sister house in Sacramento. Coencidaly, she had a big party going on that night when we arrived. We started helping ourselves to some delicious Vietnamese ethnic food, which I am craving for years. By early morning, we got up and drove to my best friend house just a few blocks away. When we arrived, another delicious oriental meals already in the table waiting for us to be eaten. This is just the second day, in general eating too much and having so much fun. Once we were done eating, we were back on the road, headed for north San Francisco to my other best friend’s house. When we arrived at Santa Rosa, friends and family gather around thrown out a surprise party for us. At that moment I told myself, we just left from Sacramento and had lunch. There’s food in my eye again. After the party was over, we headed to small town called Guerneville where my cousin’s live. We didn’t notice anything along the way because it was dark already. The following morning, my cousin took us and drove around town. We saw big redwood trees, beautiful lake with people swimming and kayaking. People walk around carrying with swimming gears. Others just wander around and enjoy the beautiful weather. When we got to the bay called Goat Rock, everyone’s eyes were wide open to the beauty of the bay. We quickly, got out of the car and took our shoes off and ran to the water. My family switched back and forth, took turn to take a shot. Finally, the day is over so we packed and headed back home. It was a blast and exciting vacation I could never forget.

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This summer my fiancé and I had fun and exciting vacation. This trip had been in the planning for nearly three years and I was very excited to finally head out to be with friends and family I had not seen in a while. We were heading for Northern California ’s wine country. Redwood trees and beautiful scenery. Places I could not wait to show to my travel partner. We got on the interstate and headed first to Sacramento where we spent our first night at my best friend’s sister’s home. She had a big birthday party going on the night we arrived. We helped ourselves to some delicious Vietnamese ethnic food, which I had been craving for years. By early morning, we got up and drove to my best friend’s house just a few blocks away. When we arrived, yet another delicious oriental meal was already waiting for us on the table. This was just the second day, and already we were eating too much and having so much fun. After the early meal, were back on the road, heading north to San Francisco to my other best friend’s house in Santa Rosa. There, more friends and family gathered around to throw a surprise party for us. Oh no I thought as I saw yet more food sitting before us. I thought its ok to splurge, after all I am on vacation and I can burn it off with all the dancing, singing and excitement yet to come. After the party was over, we headed to small town called Guerneville where my cousin lives. We didn’t notice anything along the way because it was dark already. The following morning, my cousin took us out and drove us around town. Then we saw what we missed the night before. Big redwood trees, beautiful lakes and rivers with people swimming and kayaking. People walking around carrying swimming gear and just out enjoying the mountain life in Northern California . Then we headed out for the Pacific ocean . There we got to the bay called Goat Rock. Everyone’s eyes were wide open to the beauty of the bay. We quickly, got out of the car and took off our shoes and ran to the beach and water. Staring out over the sea with the sand in my toe’s I knew I was definitely on vacation and there was plenty of more days and great experiences yet to come.