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Evgeniy Belov Posted 15 years ago
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I agree that the Internet has changed the very idea of interaction between teachers and students.
If in the past interaction between teachers and students was in a formal manner, nowadays Internet and social networks have changed the very idea of interaction between them. In the Internet students and teachers are becoming virtual “friends”. Interaction between teachers and students in the Internet has become informal. In the Internet students may speak with their teachers informally, instead of using formal language they use speaking to a teacher in a real life.
Social networks allow their users to look through the private information, photos, personal content in a free access. As a result students may receive an information about their teacher which would be never shared in a classroom setting. So I think that Internet is not the best way of making friends.
If in the past interaction between teachers and students was in a formal manner, nowadays Internet and social networks have changed the very idea of interaction between them. In the Internet students and teachers are becoming virtual “friends”. Interaction between teachers and students in the Internet has become informal. In the Internet students may speak with their teachers informally, instead of using formal language they use speaking to a teacher in a real life.
Social networks allow their users to look through the private information, photos, personal content in a free access. As a result students may receive an information about their teacher which would be never shared in a classroom setting. So I think that Internet is not the best way of making friends.
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I have crossed out unnecessary verbiage and underlined some other problems, Evgeniy: I agree that the Internet has changed the very idea of interaction between teachers and students. If in the past interaction between teachers and students was in a formal manner , nowadays the Internet and social networks have changed the very idea of interaction between them. In the Intern et stu dents and teachers are becoming virtual "friends".
- I have crossed out unnecessary verbiage and underlined some other problems, Evgeniy: I agree that the Internet has changed the very idea of interaction between teachers and students.
- If in the past interaction between teachers and students was in a formal manner , nowadays the Internet and social networks have changed the very idea of interaction between them.
- In the Intern et stu dents and teachers are becoming virtual "friends".
- Interaction between teachers and students in the Internet has become informal.
- In the Intern et st udents may speak with their teachers informally, instead of using the formal language they use speaking to a teacher in a real life .
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I have crossed out unnecessary verbiage and underlined some other problems, Evgeniy:
I agree that the Internet has changed the very idea of interaction between teachers and students.
If in the past interaction between teachers and students wasin a formal manner, nowadays the Internet and social networks have changed the very idea of int
If in the past interaction between teachers and students was
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