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Andrew619 Posted 17 years ago
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In this trip , i was traveling with my classmate in november .
I remember that i was visiting the great wall and tried to cover the difficult way,
finally , i hadn't finished it , if we had wanted to finish it , we would have been spent more time there.
By the way, my classmate was sleeping so late in trip, it is because we were playing game or talking
in bedroom,it As a matter of fact , i am very engjoy tavel to beijing with my best classmate.
Actually , i have a lot of interesting of beijing trip to share anyone now , but i am afraid is time is up.
that's all
my english is very poor , forgiven me please
I remember that i was visiting the great wall and tried to cover the difficult way,
finally , i hadn't finished it , if we had wanted to finish it , we would have been spent more time there.
By the way, my classmate was sleeping so late in trip, it is because we were playing game or talking
in bedroom,it As a matter of fact , i am very engjoy tavel to beijing with my best classmate.
Actually , i have a lot of interesting of beijing trip to share anyone now , but i am afraid is time is up.
that's all
my english is very poor , forgiven me please
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My classmate and I took a trip in November. I remember visiting The Great Wall and we tried to make it through the difficult way. Finally, I ended up not finishing it, if we had wanted to finish it we would have spent more time there.
- My classmate and I took a trip in November.
- I remember visiting The Great Wall and we tried to make it through the difficult way.
- Finally, I ended up not finishing it, if we had wanted to finish it we would have spent more time there.
- By the way, my classmate was sleeping so late during the trip because we were playing "porket" or talking in the bedroom.
- As a matter of fact, I enjoyed traveling to Beijing with my best classmate.
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My classmate and I took a trip in November. I remember visiting The Great Wall and we tried to make it through the difficult way. Finally, I ended up not finishing it, if we had wanted to finish it we would have spent more time there.
By the way, my classmate was sleeping so late during the trip because we were playing "porket" or talking in the bedroom. As a matter of fact, I enjoyed traveli
By the way, my classmate was sleeping so late during the trip because we were playing "porket" or talking in the bedroom. As a matter of fact, I enjoyed traveli
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