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SabineKatz Posted 6 years ago
Grammar

Check a short paragraph: Any mistakes?

I would be happy if you could just check the five lines stated below: Is there any mistake in terms of grammar, word choice, etc.?

For hypothesis 4, experience is operationalized using two items from the German Socio-Economic Panel (SOEP) dataset that reflect the total length of full- and part-time employment in the respondent’s career up to the point of data collection. This involves complementing the “Good Work Index” on the basis of the three variables stated above. In the SOEP-questionnaire respondents gave answers regarding their years of employment, parental leave, education & training, unemployment and volunteering – starting from their age of 15 – in a calendar.

  

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This passage uses specialized jargon that most people outside this field would not understand. ” I recommend that you get a peer ( someone who is expert in this field) to review your writing.

  • This passage uses specialized jargon that most people outside this field would not understand.
  • ” I recommend that you get a peer ( someone who is expert in this field) to review your writing.
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This passage uses specialized jargon that most people outside this field would not understand. I cannot make out what you mean by "experience is operationalized" or "complementing the Good Work Index.”

I recommend that you get a peer ( someone who is expert in this field) to review your writing.

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