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Anonymous Posted 18 years ago
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To add my positive, upbeat attitude into the diverse, working team of TELUS. is this correct?
  

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Hi, To add my positive, upbeat attitude into the diverse, working team of TELUS. I suggest this. To add my positive, upbeat attitude to the (diverse) TELUS team.

— Clive

  • Hi, To add my positive, upbeat attitude into the diverse, working team of TELUS.
  • I suggest this.
  • To add my positive, upbeat attitude to the (diverse) TELUS team.
  • Are you sure you want to say 'diverse'?
  • Teams can be diverse in a variety of ways, so will your meaning be clear?
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Hi,
To add my positive, upbeat attitude into the diverse, working team of TELUS.
I suggest this. To add my positive, upbeat attitude to the (diverse) TELUS team.

Are you sure you want to say 'diverse'? Teams can be diverse in a variety of ways, so will your meaning be clear?

Best wishes, Clive
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