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Rpels Posted 12 years ago
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This is to certify that XXX deals in conventional Detectors/Sensors and thus in its capacity of an active dealer of these products, hereby, in good faith, informs the concerned parties and individuals that neither of the following Detectors/Sensors, multicriteron in nature, is/are UL listed.
Please let me know if the above paragrap is correct.
Can somebody will correct me please?
Please let me know if the above paragrap is correct.
Can somebody will correct me please?
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You have so cluttered the sentence up with unnecessary verbiage that it is difficult to understand what you are saying, but I suppose it is this: This is to certify that *** deals in conventional detectors/sensors, and as a registered dealer hereby informs all concerned parties that neither of the following multi-critera detectors/sensors is UL listed.
- You have so cluttered the sentence up with unnecessary verbiage that it is difficult to understand what you are saying, but I suppose it is this: This is to certify that *** deals in conventional detectors/sensors, and as a registered dealer hereby informs all concerned parties that neither of the following multi-critera detectors/sensors is UL listed.
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You have so cluttered the sentence up with unnecessary verbiage that it is difficult to understand what you are saying, but I suppose it is this:
This is to certify that *** deals in conventional detectors/sensors, and as a registered dealer hereby informs all concerned parties that neither of the following multi-critera detectors/sensors is UL listed.
This is to certify that *** deals in conventional detectors/sensors, and as a registered dealer hereby informs all concerned parties that neither of the following multi-critera detectors/sensors is UL listed.
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