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Pakistan123 Posted 19 years ago
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"The popular girl"
Man is a social animal. He is designed to live with others. We daily meet many people in school and outside school. Some people are popular in school or for us. Basically popular means famous or liked by people. Everyone has its own popular personality. Whetherhe/shelike his/her negative or positive aspects of personality.
In the same way there is a girl in my class whose name is Francesca and I like her positive aspects of her personality. As there is a saying being different makes a person special. In the same way being different makes Francesca makes special. As in the military, we see the greatness of Alexander the great, the great napoleon and general Patton. In science we have determined people like Galileo and in the area of philosophy we have Socrates in the line of students I think Francesca is the best. She don’t follow anyone she has its own individuality because if you follow someone at times youwilllose your own individuality.
She has a cgpa: 4and rating the class is 2/281. She loves to stay silent. Her smile is very innocent. And last year she has also won the award of miss best smile. She likes to read novels and Time magazine. She likes to wear light colors. Everybody wants to be popular; we want to be liked; we want to be approved of. These types of emotions and feelings she doesn’t have. She is friendly to all of them but likes to live alone.
At the end I would only say that whenever i see her it looks me that I am seeing my own reflection.
Man is a social animal. He is designed to live with others. We daily meet many people in school and outside school. Some people are popular in school or for us. Basically popular means famous or liked by people. Everyone has its own popular personality. Whetherhe/shelike his/her negative or positive aspects of personality.
In the same way there is a girl in my class whose name is Francesca and I like her positive aspects of her personality. As there is a saying being different makes a person special. In the same way being different makes Francesca makes special. As in the military, we see the greatness of Alexander the great, the great napoleon and general Patton. In science we have determined people like Galileo and in the area of philosophy we have Socrates in the line of students I think Francesca is the best. She don’t follow anyone she has its own individuality because if you follow someone at times youwilllose your own individuality.
She has a cgpa: 4and rating the class is 2/281. She loves to stay silent. Her smile is very innocent. And last year she has also won the award of miss best smile. She likes to read novels and Time magazine. She likes to wear light colors. Everybody wants to be popular; we want to be liked; we want to be approved of. These types of emotions and feelings she doesn’t have. She is friendly to all of them but likes to live alone.
At the end I would only say that whenever i see her it looks me that I am seeing my own reflection.
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You might try revising and editing yourself before you post your work online and ask someone else to do that for you. In general there are many problems that I'm sure you will catch yourself in the form of run-on sentences, comma usage, verb form, and capitalization. I think your ideas about popularity are good.
- You might try revising and editing yourself before you post your work online and ask someone else to do that for you.
- In general there are many problems that I'm sure you will catch yourself in the form of run-on sentences, comma usage, verb form, and capitalization.
- I think your ideas about popularity are good.
- The information at the beginning of the third paragraph would be unclear to most readers, I think, and needs some additional explanation.
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You might try revising and editing yourself before you post your work online and ask someone else to do that for you.
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