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I've travelled to many cities in the UK. Most of them aren't not pollution-free. There were chunk of smokes everywhere. The wafts of black-odor is unpleasant that it's calling the grim to perish my soul, clutching, allaying it into the red-heat hell. There's one city that is clean and suitable for those who wants to do an agriculture: Essex.
I've got suggestions by many people about this city that how good it was, but I don't believe the fact they said. I think it is going to be like most cities I've visited in the UK. Until I set off my journey to Wickford. My thoughts have changed.
The streets are clear. There were not many cars so it is a good place for cross-country running. Also you can find a decent golf course there in the village.
But it has its downsides. There are not many department stores or convenient stores you can visit. Since it is a countryside located in east end of London so buying groceries can be a daunting task when living in Essex.
Overall, Essex is a pollution-free city. You can do a variety of outdoor activities that never stop you from exploring the wonders it has. But I expect more shopping mall to be built in the city.