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The chart provides information about attendance numbers for Grandville Stadium from 2017, which are projected through 2030 as a result of a significant improvement project. The chart shows the attendance numbers for theatre, sporting events and concerts.
Overall, the sporting events category indicates the biggest attendance number whereas the theatre category the least.
According to the chart, by the year 2030, the attendance number for theatre and concerts will indicate a bigger rise than that of sporting events.
All three categories will reach a peak in 2030.
In 2017 the theatre category has the least number of visitors, that is less than 50000.
Referring to the attendance for concerts in the 2030 year, the number will grow significantly, which will be over 100000, in contrast with the number of visitors in 2017 (bellow 50000).
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