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Tomtom27 Posted 17 years ago
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Character Reference could you check please
Hi
If you dont mind could someone please check this character refernce i have rightn for my father.
sorry to be a plan but i suffer from desxlia so im just trying to get ti right
kind regard tom
F.A.O Sentencing Judge.
Re: Character Reference For XXXXXXXXXXXX.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am ********* Son of ***************.
I'm sad to hear that my Father has been foolish enough to have been involved in this activate.
I and my father have spent many years working together in the construction industry and one thing my father hated was fellow work colleague coming into work talking about there activities involving drugs.
My father was against any activities involving drugs and this is why I couldn't understand why my father had got himself involved in this activity.
My father usually keeps his feelings to himself but he and I seem to be able, on rare
Occasion's talk, following his arrest He has told me that he has been stuck in a rut since he came out of work following his heart surgery and was not able to cope with day to day life and not doing Well financially coursing him not to see any sort of light at the end of the tunnel.
Since getting him to open up to me, he now realises the seriousness of what he has done. I can promise you that he feels full of remorse, especially as he feels that he's destroyed his self respect. He sincerely vows never to put himself or my family through this again.
I suppose that what I'm trying to say is that ******* has struggled so hard to go forward in life that I fear that imprisonment would set him back to where he started and it would totally destroy him and my family. I know he has learnt his lesson and he won't ever attempt to do this again
Yours faithfully
If you dont mind could someone please check this character refernce i have rightn for my father.
sorry to be a plan but i suffer from desxlia so im just trying to get ti right
kind regard tom
F.A.O Sentencing Judge.
Re: Character Reference For XXXXXXXXXXXX.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am ********* Son of ***************.
I'm sad to hear that my Father has been foolish enough to have been involved in this activate.
I and my father have spent many years working together in the construction industry and one thing my father hated was fellow work colleague coming into work talking about there activities involving drugs.
My father was against any activities involving drugs and this is why I couldn't understand why my father had got himself involved in this activity.
My father usually keeps his feelings to himself but he and I seem to be able, on rare
Occasion's talk, following his arrest He has told me that he has been stuck in a rut since he came out of work following his heart surgery and was not able to cope with day to day life and not doing Well financially coursing him not to see any sort of light at the end of the tunnel.
Since getting him to open up to me, he now realises the seriousness of what he has done. I can promise you that he feels full of remorse, especially as he feels that he's destroyed his self respect. He sincerely vows never to put himself or my family through this again.
I suppose that what I'm trying to say is that ******* has struggled so hard to go forward in life that I fear that imprisonment would set him back to where he started and it would totally destroy him and my family. I know he has learnt his lesson and he won't ever attempt to do this again
Yours faithfully
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Hi,
I've tried to help by correcting what you have written (corrected version pasted in below). I have not changed any of your wording significantly, but I have corrected your grammar/punctuation etc.
I hope that this helps you and I wish your father and family well.
F.A.O Sentencing Judge.
Re: Character Reference For XX.
Dear Sir/Mad
I've tried to help by correcting what you have written (corrected version pasted in below). I have not changed any of your wording significantly, but I have corrected your grammar/punctuation etc.
I hope that this helps you and I wish your father and family well.
F.A.O Sentencing Judge.
Re: Character Reference For XX.
Dear Sir/Mad
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