Character Descriptions/biographies (if I can remember them...) -_-;;

0I probably may be one of many to ask about character descriptions and bio corrections, so what I ask for may or may not come at you newly. (Don't even know if that made any sense -.-; )02br
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00I am sufferring a terrible view of writing, meaning I can think stuff up, probably very out of imagination, it's that my writing and the depression lowers my once good senses. It seems to be the more I grow older, the more I become the worse writer you'll ever meet (did I mention if I speak, they come out not how I wished for and misunderstanding most of the time?). Seriously, my work is depending on a damn program (StyleWriter or WhiteSmoke, which ever's better - somehow I prefer more of StyleWriter, sadly it costs more -.-; )02br
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00People say that my sentenses sound awkward, and give that familiar ring to it; so they can understand it, but only at a slight. Reason vary to either my sensetence structuring, my bad way of revising and reading comprehension (or rereading it; which makes me believe I have freakin Dyslexia, and I even add a lot of useless sentences and mostly resaid sentences but in different formations and way of saying it, and i really don'y even notice how people can see it like that and I can't), or too long sentences, or may other clauses (I don't even know what clause means, and I've read its description many times and still don't understand). [Oh, and my tenses, those are to be the most vague, and I know most of them well; say for the "has/had/have" was/were" I sort of do not know sometimes; they get me into a mix up once I think about my tenses. Usually I prefer past tense on my biographies/past participles on my character's actions/any sort of tense on their dialogues and sayings]02br
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00I am only 16, and had had this as a mishap since the first couple of months I started to "Role Play" descriptively, not like those easy-posting Gaia users, on a web site. It's weird. I was once known to be one of the best, and to type the longest, now finds myself feeling stupid around when I began to feel depressed. And my depression is something stupid in real life and really I don't feel comfortable speaking about it - it's namely about sociality in you typical highshcool and lack of friendship.02br
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00Now, I say this once: My work will all be posted on this thread; so once one is finished, I will likely have to continue to ask on my next; it may take some time to regain my ideas and also think up new ones since my computer was deleted, destroying all and my cousin's RP work. And I mean we revised them like no tomarrow! My favorite and unsaid character happened to be my own making of Scar, from FMA (Full Metal Alchemist), on a separate role-playing grounds that is way different than.02br
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00Now, onto my first description, which is no where as eglant and no where as good as my first Scar char (this is all I can remember of his physical description since the recreation of my computer; how i despise viruses so!!!!!):02br
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01font00He has the description of a brute, all his life he has been only improving his properties of the mind, engery, and physinogomy. His eyes, so deeply describes lushous green however carry a burdensome past that made him a well known man who's feared by many. A single stare seems to pierce right and 01i00through 02i00your very soul. With little effor he can break you down, enforce you to tremble with fear with just his presence. The scar on his head speaks to you of the description of a terrifying man, but to him, it speaks of his very first and only lost in battle. You hear about him a lot, the things he went through, it may make you feel wary, especially his past deeds as one deadly and unstopable fiend who casted away a hundred men for just a note. Narrowed downwadly is the slope of his long sharp nose that protrudes out of his face, breathing life into his prolong frown. 02font02br
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01font00Clothing:02font00 If I ever can remember, hopefully I can, we can go through that at a later time. 02br
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00Seriously, this character was a prize winner before I lost him (edit: with over 2,000 words worth), and allowed the damn virus sweep him and many many finished things away. His biography was well described and structured and even lived like the son of the rarest and deadliest flower 01del00father02del00 and one of the lovelilest flowers 01del00mother02del00 (I can't believed I remeber even this much!).02br
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00If any knows a way I can regain my old information in my old system, please, please reply. I need almost all of my character/tech/clan/organization's work.02br
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00P.S:00 I have no Word Doc anymore as of right now. My mom apparently lost it long before we lost the programs and everything else on the comp and likely would never allow me to download anything ever again. Another question: if you ship the writing program you desire, which are only the ones said above, to a community college and not a University would they likely have a decreased price, like many other pricy programs?030c srchttp://img514.imageshack.us/img514/369/scarijs2.png