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Moguwai007 Posted 12 years ago
Grammar
Changing your reservation
For a description of conditions shown on a hotel reservation site, I wish to shorten the sentence #1 to #2.
Could you please tell me if that sounds natural?
#1.Should you wish to change an existing reservation, you are required to create a new reservation and cancel the existing booking . This maybe done by visiting our website.
#2. Changing your reservation: Please create a new reservation and then cancel the existing booking. This may be done by visiting our website.
Could you please tell me if that sounds natural?
#1.Should you wish to change an existing reservation, you are required to create a new reservation and cancel the existing booking . This maybe done by visiting our website.
#2. Changing your reservation: Please create a new reservation and then cancel the existing booking. This may be done by visiting our website.
Top answer
This is a bit shorter: To change a reservation, please visit our website, create a new reservation and then cancel your previous one.
- This is a bit shorter: To change a reservation, please visit our website, create a new reservation and then cancel your previous one.
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This is a bit shorter:
To change a reservation, please visit our website, create a new reservation and then cancel your previous one.
To change a reservation, please visit our website, create a new reservation and then cancel your previous one.
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