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Essay & Composition Writing
Change in rate of smoking
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( teacher to students) : How to describe a graph
The graph shows the change in rate of smoking between men and women from 1960 to 2000. As you see , the change is recorded every five years, such as from 1960 to 1965 and from 1965 to 1970... And do you think you have to mention each change? That is, do you think you have explain every figure in detail? No, you should summarzie the graph in meaningful way.
( teacher to students) : How to describe a graph
The graph shows the change in rate of smoking between men and women from 1960 to 2000. As you see , the change is recorded every five years, such as from 1960 to 1965 and from 1965 to 1970... And do you think you have to mention each change? That is, do you think you have explain every figure in detail? No, you should summarzie the graph in meaningful way.
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( teacher to students) : How to describe a graph The graph shows the change in rate of smoking between men and women from 1960 to 2000. As you see , the change is recorded every five years, such as from 1960 to 1965 and from 1965 to 1970 ... And do you think you have to mention each change?
- ( teacher to students) : How to describe a graph The graph shows the change in rate of smoking between men and women from 1960 to 2000.
- As you see , the change is recorded every five years, such as from 1960 to 1965 and from 1965 to 1970 ...
- And do you think you have to mention each change?
- That is, do you think you have explain every figure in detail?
- No, you should summarzie the graph in meaningful way.
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( teacher to students) : How to describe a graph
The graph shows the change in rate of smoking between men and women from 1960 to 2000. As you see , the change is recorded every five years, such as from 1960 to 1965 and from 1965 to 1970... And do you think you have to mention each change? That is, do you think you have explain every figure in detail?
The graph shows the change in rate of smoking between men and women from 1960 to 2000. As you see , the change is recorded every five years, such as from 1960 to 1965 and from 1965 to 1970... And do you think you have to mention each change? That is, do you think you have explain every figure in detail?
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between--> in
as you see --> as you know,
recorded--> the rate is recorded( I don't know)
have explain--? have to explain
summarize->summarize?
as you see --> as you know,
recorded--> the rate is recorded( I don't know)
have explain--? have to explain
summarize->summarize?
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When I have indicated several problems, could you instead make your changes and present the whole revised text, sun? It is sometimes difficult to decipher what change you would actually make and how it might affect the text around it.
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