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Change in appearacne

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His friens who came to American thirty years ago obtained American appearnce, such as broadened jaw. He ascribed this change to the frequent use of jaw muscle when speaking English. This change in immigrants' appearnce was perceived by a historian in 1910.
  

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Hi, If you see any mistakes in the following sentence, can I have your comments? His friens who came to American thirty years ago obtained American appearnce, such as broadened jaw. He ascribed this change to the frequent use of jaw muscle when speaking English.

  • Hi, If you see any mistakes in the following sentence, can I have your comments?
  • His friens who came to American thirty years ago obtained American appearnce, such as broadened jaw.
  • He ascribed this change to the frequent use of jaw muscle when speaking English.
  • This change in immigrants' appearnce was perceived by a historian in 1910.
  • His friends who came to America thirty years ago took on an American appearance, with, for example, a broadened jaw.
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Hi,

If you see any mistakes in the following sentence, can I have your comments?

His friens who came to American thirty years ago obtained American appearnce, such as broadened jaw. He ascribed this change to the frequent use of jaw muscle when speaking English. This change in immigrants' appearnce was perceived by a historian in 1910.

His friends who came to Ameri

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