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cellphone ailinate students

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Cellphones can make students feel alienated. For example, students communicate with one another through mobile social networking system, such as facebook. If they don't have a cell phone, they cannot be invovled in such mobible conversation, so they will feel alinated.
  

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I have underlined some problems: Lack of cellphones can make students feel alienated. For example, students communicate with one another through mobile social networking system, such as facebook . If they don't have a cell phone, they cannot be invovled in such mobible conversation, so they will feel alinated .

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  • I have underlined some problems: Lack of cellphones can make students feel alienated.
  • For example, students communicate with one another through mobile social networking system, such as facebook .
  • If they don't have a cell phone, they cannot be invovled in such mobible conversation, so they will feel alinated .
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I have underlined some problems:

Lack of cellphones can make students feel alienated. For example, students communicate with one another through mobile social networking system, such as facebook. If they don't have a cell phone, they cannot be invovled in such mobible conversation, so they will feel alinated.
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For example students communicate with one another through mobile social networking, such as Facebook. If they don't have a cell phone, they cannot become involvled in such mobile conversation, so they will feel alienated.
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If they don't have a cell phone, they cannot become involvled in such mobile conversation, so they will feel alienated.
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