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Dj Bueno Posted 20 years ago
CeaselesS BurdenS
A noisy silence inside
Violent than a tornado.
I can hear the beats of my heart
They're playing a touching concerto.
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While I was thinking
"Monday chats are not enough"
Suddenly the beats started to play
The song "Your Time Is Up"..
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It's not the end of world perhaps
But it's the end of my happiness
That's why I'm doleful
That's why I'm helpless...
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A noisy silence inside
Though I'd quieted all the voices down
Am I actually suppose to go?
Has the time really come?
DjB
Violent than a tornado.
I can hear the beats of my heart
They're playing a touching concerto.
--- --- ---
While I was thinking
"Monday chats are not enough"
Suddenly the beats started to play
The song "Your Time Is Up"..
--- --- ---
It's not the end of world perhaps
But it's the end of my happiness
That's why I'm doleful
That's why I'm helpless...
--- --- ---
A noisy silence inside
Though I'd quieted all the voices down
Am I actually suppose to go?
Has the time really come?
DjB
Top answer
A couple of mistakes in it, but - overall - that's a good work. [8]
- A couple of mistakes in it, but - overall - that's a good work.
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Hey I should have written "supposed to" not "suppose" but i dont accept this as a grammar mistake cos it's my keybord'S fault. It is running out of battery I think. time to change the batteries.
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Dj BuenoHey I should have written "supposed to" not "suppose" but i dont accept this as a grammar mistake cos it's my keybord'S fault. It is running out of battery I think. time to change the batteries.I was just teasing you.
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Since I know how naughty you are, dear gran, I did not actually take it seriously [H][Y] Or did I? 
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